Oh man, my head hurts. But... headache or no headache, I found some spare time today and started reading part 1, finished it all in one go, then came back for part 2 as soon as I got some more free time. This is really good.

I warn you now: You still have to get past the critics. But as far as getting the reader's attention with a good story... You got that. @_@

Now... some aspirin... -stumbles off-